八年级（上）英语U 6-10 单元---书面表达
讲 与 练 学 案
书面表达是对学生语言交际能力和语言知识的灵活运用能力的考查。是一项对知识综合能力的测试，需要学生掌握扎实的语言基础知识，具备良好的交际、逻辑和灵活变通能力。
写作时，七年级上册英语绩优学案答案，要把一些孤立的素材，进行整理、思考，使其素材有条理性、逻辑性。在写作过程中注意：1）仔细审题，把握中心。根据题目的信息，确定中心，构思写作框架；根据写作顺序，列举动词、句子结构、关联词语；同时约定动词、句子的主体时态。2）拟提纲，提炼要点。拟提纲是要根据题目给出的信息，理清思路，确定开篇、中心、结尾的写作侧重重点，避免遗漏要点。提炼要点是指把题目中信息，逐项逐条列出，但不宜过细，并将句型、关键词等写下来。3）组词成句，连句成篇。立足课本中、练习时积累的自己熟悉的或有把握的句型、短语结构，先用简单句组词成句，再考虑使用多句型提升文章质量。避免句型重复使用，并注意从句的时态是否正确。另外切记先用中文组织句子再翻译成英语，这就会出现中文式的英语，不要去造句或根据自己的表达需要凭空捏造，一定要用自己见过或听过的句子、句型。写作时，注意行文的连贯性，主语的一致性；上下句的过度自然，过渡词或过渡句的选择要保持前后句意思顺畅。
写作中会遇到个别不能准确表达的要点，可采用变通的办法，用几个简单句去表述，不要为增加文采，力求用复合句，人为增加扣分点。只要句子正确，符合英语的表达习惯即可。
在最后，检查文章句子或句型的时态或句法、短语结构搭配是否正确；检查时一定要轻声读一读，用语感体会是否符合英语表达习惯或缺少句子成分，造成中文式的句子。再看看单词的拼写或词性、单复数等等词法的细节。
Exercise 一
假设 Eric 是你表弟，请根据下面的中文提示写一篇８０词左右的文章。
1 . 表弟比你小两岁， 和你一样高， 是班里最高的男生之一。性格外向， 受同学喜爱。
2、他爱运动，擅长打篮球，比其他男孩打得好，想成为另一个姚明。
3、他也爱旅游，去年和我们一下去三亚玩得很开心，很放松，他最爱海鲜。
4、明年假期他打算去当志愿者，教小孩打篮球，希望能帮助到别人。
提示词： 海鲜 sea food 担当 work as 志愿者 volunteer
Eric is my cousin. He is two years younger than me but he is as tall as me. He is one of the tallest boys in his class. He is outgoing and friendly to other people. All his classmates like him . He likes sports and does well in playing basketball. He plays better than any other boy in his class. He wants to be another Yao Ming. He likes travelling，too.
Last year he went to Sanya with us and had a great time there. The beautiful sea and beach made him very relaxed. He enjoyed the sea food most. Next year he will work as a volunteer. He is going to teach children how to play basketball. He hopes to help those in need.
假如本期校英语报的征文题目是 “My Future Life ”，那么你的未来会是什么样的呢？请你根据下面的内容提示，发挥想象，写一篇短文投稿。
提示：
1. What will you be?
2. What does your home look like?
3. What will you do in your free time?.
要求：
1. 语句通顺、符合逻辑，可适当发挥；
2. 不少于80词。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My Future Life
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My Future Life
In twenty years，I think I’ll be a policeman. I will work in my hometown，because I love it and I want to protect it. Being a policeman will be dangerous，but it will also be exciting. I’ll do my best to help people who are in danger and make them feel safe. I will help the students who have no parents with their life and study.
I will live in a small but comfortable apartment with my family. When I’m free，I will travel to other cities with my family.I will spend time with them enjoying the life. That’s my life in the future. I hope it will come true.
西红柿炒鸡蛋(scrambled eggs with tomatoes)是一道家常菜，它既美味可口又简单易做。根据所给提示，以“How to make scrambled eggs with tomatoes”为题写一篇80个词左右的短文。
原料: 一个西红柿、三个鸡蛋、一个青椒(green pepper)、盐、油(oil)
步骤:
1. 将西红柿和青椒切碎;
2. 把鸡蛋打破(break)放入碗里并搅拌;
3. 往鸡蛋里放些盐并搅拌;
4. 将平底锅(pan)加热，锅里放些油，然后放入鸡蛋、西红柿和青椒;
5. 翻炒两分钟即可。
How to make scrambled eggs with tomatoes
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How to make scrambled eggs with tomatoes
Do you like scrambled eggs with tomatoes? The dish is delicious and easy to cook. Here’s a recipe for it. First cut up one tomato and one green pepper. Next break three eggs and put them into a bowl and mix them. Add some salt to the bowl and mix again. Then heat the pan and pour some oil into the pan. Put the eggs，the tomato and the green pepper into the pan. Finally cook for two minutes. Now you can enjoy it.
9.英语 句子 的书写句子开头的第一个单词的第一个字母要大写,单词与单词之间要有适当的距离,一般为放入一个字母的空隙,句末要有标点符号,英语的句号是个实心圆点,而不是汉语中的小圆圈。 10..大写字母的用法 1)英语句子开头的第一。
Exercise 二
提示:1.包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使行文连贯;
2. 词数80左右。文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tom。
Thank you very much for inviting me to your birthday party.
Yours。
Wang Ming
Dear Tom。
Thank you very much for inviting me to your birthday party.
I’d love to go to your party，but I can’t. My father is busy working in another city. He won’t come back until next month. And now I have to look after my mum because she is ill in bed. I think my parents give us so much ，I must look after her well now. And the English exam is coming，I will try my best to study for it. I’m very sorry that I can’t go to your party. Thanks for your invitation. I hope you will have a good time.
Happy birthday to you!
Yours。
Wang Ming
假定你是苏华，最近你的澳大利亚笔友Nathan犯了一些错误，倍感懊恼，写了一封邮件向你诉说，为帮助他排解困感，请你根据他的邮件内容并结合自身经历．用英语回信开导他。
To：subua@china.com
From：nathan.australia.com
Subjects： Learning from mistakes
Dear Su Hue。
I&39;ve made some mistakes recently. They're troubling me a lot these days. I really need your help. Would you please share your experience with me?
u Do you agree that everyone makes mistakes?
u Can you tell me one of your mistakes?
u How did you deal with your problem?
u What have you learned from the mistake?
eg.1) The book on the desk is mine. 桌子上的书是我的。(特指)七年级英语考试知识点 1.现在进行时 其结构为be的现在式(am, is, are)+ 现在分词(V-ing)。否定形式在be后面加not，疑问式将be动词提前 2.动词。
I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.
All the best。
Nathan
注意： l.词数90左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词量；
2．回复须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；
3．文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Nathan。
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I hope my experience can help you out.
Best wishes
Su Hua
Dear Nathan。
I&39;t worry too much. As an old saying goes，“No one is perfect!”It's true that everyone makes mistakes.
Take me as an example. One day，I spent so much time playing football with my friends that I forgot to do my homework. I said sorry to my teacher and finished it the next day. I learned I must put my schoolwork first .Only when I finish my homework，I can work with my hobbies.
I think if we make mistakes .We should know we were wrong. And then we must correct them and learn from them. In this way，others will understand you. Then you will feel much better.
I hope my experience can help you out.
Best wishes.
Su Hua
Exercise 三
心怀感恩，与爱同行。感谢父母，他们给予你生命，抚养你成人；感谢老师，他们教给你知识，引领你做“大写的人”；感谢朋友，他们让你感受到世界的温暖；感谢对手，他们令你不断进取、超越自我。假定你是凯伦，在新年来临之际，用英语写一封信给你最想表达谢意的人，内容包括：
1. 写信的原因；
总之,微课在中学英语课堂的使用还有很长的路需要我们去探索,这不仅仅需要广大学者的努力,和国家的大力推广,更关键是中学英语教师在实践中必须去尝试,才能根本推动中学英语微课的发展。 人教版七年级上册英语预备篇教案相关 文章 : 1. 人。
2. 发生在你们之间，让你感动的事情；
3. 表达对新的一年及未来的祝愿。
要求：
1. 词数80—100词，开头和结尾己给出，不计入总词数；
2. 围绕主题，要点齐全，层次清晰，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 书写规范，注意正确使用标点；
4. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear
I'm writing this letter to express my deep thanks to you for_________________
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Yours。
Karen
Dear 。
I'm writing this letter to express my thanks to you for helping me with my English study during the past two years.
I can still remember how poor my English was when I came to junior high school. And I even felt nervous each time I had an English class. Knowing this，you talked with me patiently and let me know the importance of learning English well. Then you even spent much of your free time helping me. With your help，I got good marks in the final examination. You are such a good teacher，so I improved my English.
Next year I will keep working hard to get better grades and I wish you good health and all the best in the new year.
Yours。
Karen
