English composition writing
【剖析】
描述家人的英语作文如下：I have a happy family. It is warm and nice. There are three peole in my family. My mother, my father and I. My mother is a beautiful woman. She has two big eyes and a smal。
本单元以“家庭”为话题，主要围绕介绍家人而展开。写作时首先要理清人物之间的关系，其次要注意语言表达准确、有条理，介绍家人英语5句话简单，主谓搭配一致。写此类话题作文多用第一人称，时态为一般现在时，行文中注意对家庭成员的称呼。此类话题作文吸引阅卷人眼球的亮点表达有：
(1) Here is a photo of my family.
(2)This/That is ...
(3)These/Those are ...
英语描述家人如下：There are six people in my family：my mother,father,brother,grandmother,grandfather and I.我家有六口人：我的母亲、父亲、兄弟、祖母、祖父和我。Most of us have black hair,except my mother 。
(4)He/She is ..…
(5)They are ...
范文：My Family. I have a hapy family.My mother is tall and thin.My father is very strong.I am thin.But we all active. My mother can cook the meals.My father can wash the clothes.I can set the t。
【典例】
1.审题指导（把握中心，得方向分）
1）明确写作目的是介绍照片中的人物。
2）介绍的先后顺序是什么？
1.可以介绍家庭成员的年龄、外貌等。例句1:My mother is 37 years old.我的妈妈37岁了。例句2:My grandpa is over 60 years old.我的爷爷60多岁了。例句3:My sister is three years older than me.我的姐姐比我大。
3）用哪些句式结构介绍？
My mother is 35 years old. But I can still see how beautiful she was when she was young.我母亲是35岁。但我仍然可以看到她年轻时是多么美丽。She is not very tall but very thin. Her eyes are black. It 。
4）时态要用一般现在时，人称要用第一人称和第三人称。
2.写作技巧（学会方法，巧得高分）
“三步法”介绍照片中的家庭成员
第一步：总体介绍是什么照片。
第二步：分别介绍家庭成员。
第三步：表达情感。
3.写作模板（学会套路，得基本分）
模板
4.经典词句（妙用句式，得出彩分）
uncle，aunt，cousin，they，love
短语：a photo of，the little boy
句子：Here is a photo of ......
正文：I have a happy, warm home, a family of three people, father, mother and I.我有一个幸福、温馨的家，一家三口人，爸爸、妈妈和我。My father has a long, thin face and a pair of glasses. Every 。
These/Those are my ......
The tall man is ......
I love my family.
5.范文赏析（书写工整，得印象分）
名师点评：
family！
没有什么事情是理所当然，要知道越努力越幸运。
Fighting！
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